the ground shakes with her footsteps
leaving me second-hand aftershocks
like a partner’s orgasm
I’m content with that
she stirs me
into action, accidentally
on this wooden bridge
her footsteps tremble me
so that when she passes
when she is gone
I will still be here
in her afterglow
breathing harder
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Quiver by Juushika Written for Gallery of Words entry 10.17.03 Comments much appreciated as always |
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LOL.
Beautiful. You've really captured the feelings of longing and desire.
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"A painting finished from edge to edge but poorly done is a waste of paint. An incomplete sketch superbly executed is power." - Richard Schmid
Nicely written, well done
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